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Thursday, June 02, 2005

Jonathan's Story

Today Jonathan wrote a short story.
His assignment was as follows:
Write me a story about a train ride. Use these words in your story -
forest
fun
conductor
crossing
cow
family
railroad

Here is his story ~

One day my family was having fun in the forest. Then a train came. The conductor came out and said, "Do you want a ride?"
So we said "yes."
So we went on the train. We went past a cow and thrug (through) a railroad crossing. Then we came home.
The end.

We did help him on the quotations & punctuation of the question. Other than that, the story is his. :o) We think he did a great job!!

6 Comments:

  • At 7:36 PM, Anonymous said…

    Wow! What a great story! A. Tina and I both enjoyed it very much! Good Job! - A. Kamali

     
  • At 5:17 PM, Anonymous said…

    Thank you for saying my story was good. :o)
    ~ Jonathan

     
  • At 1:50 PM, Anonymous said…

    Jonathan, that is a great story!!!!!!!!!!
    Grandma

     
  • At 8:54 PM, Anonymous said…

    I love you, Grandma. Thanks for saying my story is good.
    ~ Jonathan

     
  • At 6:25 PM, stewart said…

    Great~ Love Grandfather

     
  • At 8:00 AM, Anonymous said…

    Thanks, Grandfather! I love you. ~ Jonathan

     

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